ELPS-TELPAS Proficiency Level Descriptors
Grades 2–12 Writing
Beginning Intermediate Advanced Advanced High
Beginning English learners
(ELs) lack the English vocabulary and
grasp of English language structures
necessary to address grade-appropriate
writing tasks meaningfully.
Intermediate ELs have enough English
vocabulary and enough grasp of English
language structures to address grade-
appropriate writing tasks in a limited way.
Advanced ELs have enough English
vocabulary and command of English
language structures to address grade-
appropriate writing tasks, although
second language acquisition support is
needed.
Advanced high ELs have acquired the
English vocabulary and command of
English language structures necessary to
address grade-appropriate writing tasks
with minimal second language
acquisition support.
These students:
• have little or no ability to use the English
language to express ideas in writing and
engage meaningfully in grade-appropriate
writing assignments in content area
instruction
• lack the English necessary to develop or
demonstrate elements of grade-
appropriate writing (e.g., focus and
coherence, conventions, organization,
voice, and development of ideas) in
English
Typical writing features at this level:
• ability to label, list, and copy
• high-frequency words/phrases and short,
simple sentences (or even short
paragraphs) based primarily on recently
practiced, memorized, or highly familiar
material; this type of writing may be quite
accurate
• present tense used primarily
• frequent primary language features
(spelling patterns, word order, literal
translations, and words from the student’s
primary language) and other errors
associated with second language
acquisition may significantly hinder or
prevent understanding, even for
individuals accustomed to the writing of
ELs
These students:
• have a limited ability to use the English
language to express ideas in writing and
engage meaningfully in grade-appropriate
writing assignments in content area
instruction
• are limited in their ability to develop or
demonstrate elements of grade-appropriate
writing in English; communicate best when
topics are highly familiar and concrete, and
require simple, high-frequency English
Typical writing features at this level:
• simple, original messages consisting of
short, simple sentences; frequent
inaccuracies occur when creating or taking
risks beyond familiar English
• high-frequency vocabulary; academic
writing often has an oral tone
• loosely connected text with limited use of
cohesive devices or repetitive use, which
may cause gaps in meaning
• repetition of ideas due to lack of vocabulary
and language structures
• present tense used most accurately; simple
future and past tenses, if attempted, are
used inconsistently or with frequent
inaccuracies
• descriptions, explanations, and narrations
lacking detail; difficulty expressing abstract
ideas
• primary language features and errors
associated with second language
acquisition may be frequent
•
some writing may be understood only by
individuals accustomed to the writing of ELs;
parts of the writing may be hard to
understand even for individuals accustomed
to the writing of ELs
These students:
• are able to use the English language, with
second language acquisition support, to
express ideas in writing and engage
meaningfully in grade-appropriate writing
assignments in content area instruction
• know enough English to be able to
develop or demonstrate elements of
grade-appropriate writing in English,
although second language acquisition
support is particularly needed when topics
are abstract, academically challenging, or
unfamiliar
Typical writing features at this level:
• grasp of basic verbs, tenses, grammar
features, and sentence patterns; partial
grasp of more complex verbs, tenses,
grammar features, and sentence patterns
• emerging grade-appropriate vocabulary;
academic writing has a more academic
tone
• use of a variety of common cohesive
devices, although some redundancy may
occur
• narrations, explanations, and descriptions
developed in some detail with emerging
clarity; quality or quantity declines when
abstract ideas are expressed, academic
demands are high, or low-frequency
vocabulary is required
• occasional second language acquisition
errors
•
communications are usually understood
by individuals not accustomed to the
writing of ELs
These students:
• are able to use the English language, with
minimal second language acquisition
support, to express ideas in writing and
engage meaningfully in grade-appropriate
writing assignments in content area
instruction
• know enough English to be able to
develop or demonstrate, with minimal
second language acquisition support,
elements of grade-appropriate writing
in English
Typical writing features at this level:
• nearly comparable to writing of native
English-speaking peers in clarity and
precision with regard to English
vocabulary and language structures, with
occasional exceptions when writing about
academically complex ideas, abstract
ideas, or topics requiring low-frequency
vocabulary
• occasional difficulty with naturalness of
phrasing and expression
• errors associated with second language
acquisition are minor and usually limited
to low-frequency words and structures;
errors rarely interfere with communication